I really enjoyed putting this one together. Take the title and run with it, and I'd love it if you commented on the piece and told me what story you're hearing.
(Hint- pirates, soldiers, rough seas, and maybe a captain's daughter...)
Sinking The Treacherous
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Awesome, ummm... something Vigilante maybe near the end of a movie with someone killed then the main character(s) riding, flying, driving of sailing into the sunset.
yes, no?
Maybe. :-D In this way it definitely has elements of subjectivity to it, and I can see your story in it.
I loved it! it seemed to start, almost in the middle... It didn't seem to have a beginning, (if that makes sense). Not saying that's a bad thing - I liked it.
I was picturing a sea battle between two ships - one ship being pirates, the other not - first with canons, then the pirates were boarded and hand to hand combat ensued. In the end, there was victory and the pirates were vanquished. :D
To the KING be all the glory!
Rebekah
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